thehoursfinal

thehoursfinal, originally uploaded by bohostripe*.

critique for 4/17
this is waht i worked on for the 4 page mall story. i think one of my weaker points is features. i always focus so much on the first page of it--the more graphic part, and then i feel like i neglect the rest--not purposefully of course, but it always looks that way. i'm glad it's over. my favorite part about this spread was my typography with the name and the clock hands.

response:
trend assignments:
it was really interesting hearing from my person. he's not only a truly talented designer but also really smart and savvy. His responses provided a lot of insight for me. i want to be independent and have a lot of the control--i also want to stick to a less conventional kind of design. again, what he had to say gave me more of an idea of what i have to expect or be wary of in the future.
also, hearing about all of the other trend reports was super interesting as well. just how people ended up getting where they are i found especially helpful.
*(hannah).